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Bahasa Inggeris notes, unit 9

Gapped texts and how texts hold together

Textbook Close-up B1 Student's Book, Second Edition (Form 3), National Geographic Learning / Cengage — 12 units; skills-based chapters for the UASA, pages Close-up B1 (Form 3): Unit 8 reading, Reading around the gap, pp.96-97; Unit 7 checking spelling and reviewing your writing, pp.88 and 93 (creating suspense); Unit 11 finding synonyms, p.137; Writing Reference, pp.176-181 (linking words and text plans)

What this chapter covers

  • I know what Paper 1 Part 5 looks like - one text, six gaps (35 to 40), eight sentences A to H with two extra, 6 marks (9.1)
  • I can use the Exam Close-up "Reading around the gap" - skim, think of a word, test the options and read before and after the gap (9.2)
  • I can tell what kind of word is missing (noun, verb form, preposition or linking word) from the words next to the gap (9.2)
  • I can find what he, they, it, this, which, such, one and the latter point to, including a whole idea, and use them to match a sentence to a gap (9.3)
  • I can use synonyms and general words, such as storm and the bad weather, to see how two sentences join (9.3)
  • I can say what job a linking word does (adding, contrast, alternative, result, reason, example, time, sudden, concluding) and use however, nevertheless, although and despite correctly (9.4)
  • I can use the plan of an email, story, review or report and the topic sentence of a paragraph to predict a missing sentence (9.5)
  • I can check order and tense in a story (past simple, past continuous, past perfect) and use suspense expressions (9.6)
  • I can follow a six-step method and rule out sentences that fail the pointer, link, topic, order, repetition or contradiction check (9.7, 9.8)

In Paper 1 Part 5 sentences have been taken out of a text, and you put them back in the right places. In Form 3 the texts are longer and the clues are less obvious than in Form 1: a pointer may refer to a whole idea, not just a noun, and two sentences may both look possible. This unit shows how a text holds together (cohesion) and gives you a method for every gapped text. It follows the Close-up B1 book: reading around the gap (Unit 8, p.97), finding synonyms (Unit 11, p.137), checking spelling and reviewing your writing (Unit 7, pp.88 and 93) and the linking words in the Writing Reference (pp.176 to 181).

9.1What Part 5 looks like

Part 5 at a glanceDetails
Questions6 (Questions 35 to 40), 1 mark each, 6 marks in all
Timepart of the timed Paper 1; a fair guide is about 1.5 minutes for each gap, so about 10 minutes
Textsone short text with six gaps. In Form 3 expect a story or recount, an article, an informal email or a short report (the text types in the Writing Reference)
Sentenceseight sentences, A to H, are given for the six gaps. Six sentences fit the gaps and two are extra: you do not use them, so do not expect every letter to be used
Answerblacken one letter for each gap
Cohesion means the small links that join sentences into one text: reference words (it, this, such), linking words (however, in addition), repeated words and synonyms, and the order and tense of events. The right sentence is the one that links to the words before and after the gap.
Form 1 textsForm 3 texts
8 gaps in two texts, no extra sentences6 gaps in one text, 8 sentences with two extra
short sentences, one clue for each gaplonger sentences; two or three clues for each gap, and the clue after the gap is often the key
it, they point to a nounthis, which, such point to a whole idea; the former and the latter
however, so, thennevertheless, as a result, meanwhile, alternatively, in conclusion
past simple in storiespast simple, past continuous and past perfect together
Because two sentences are extra, a sentence can look right and still be wrong. Section 9.8 shows how to rule such sentences out.

9.2Reading around the gap: word gaps

The textbook uses a gapped text in which you choose a single word for each gap (Unit 8, p.97). The same skill helps in sentence gaps: you must read the words around the gap, not only the gap itself.

Textbook Exam Close-up box headed Reading around the gap with four bullet points: read the text quickly for a general understanding, re-read the sentences with gaps and think of a word that could fit, read the answer options and eliminate the obviously wrong ones, and read around the gap when two answers seem possible
The textbook's four steps for a gapped text.

Figure: Close-up B1 Student's Book (Form 3), p.97.

StepWhat you do
1Read the whole text quickly for the general idea. Do not stop at the gaps.
2Go back to each gap and think of a word before you look at the options.
3Read the options. Cross out the obviously wrong ones, then test the rest.
4If two seem possible, read the sentence before and after the gap, and check that the whole sentence is correct.

What kind of word is missing?

Look at the words next to the gapThe gap needsExample
a, an, the, or an adjective before ita nouna long journey
to, can, must, will before itthe base form of a verbWe must leave early.
has, have, had before ita past participleShe has lived here for years.
is, are, was, were before it-ing form or past participle (active or passive)The road is being repaired.
a preposition before ita noun or an -ing formgood at drawing
a verb or adjective that takes a fixed prepositionthe correct prepositioncope with, depend on
a clause on each sidea linking wordIt was late, so we went home.
Example: three gaps

"Orang utans spend most of their lives in the (1) ______ of tall trees. They (2) ______ a new nest every evening from branches and leaves. Sadly, their forest is being (3) ______ down for palm oil farms."

(1) a. roots   b. tops   c. floor   d. holes
(2) a. build   b. builds   c. building   d. built
(3) a. cut   b. cutting   c. cuts   d. cutted

(1) b: orang utans live in trees, so the tops; the others are on the ground. (2) a: They is plural and the sentence is a routine in the present simple, so build. (3) a: is being needs a past participle, and the participle of cut is cut.

Do not pick a word because it "sounds nice". Read the whole sentence again with your word in it, including the words after the gap. Make a decision and take a decision may both be heard in English, but do a decision is wrong: the verb must go with the noun.
Choose the word: "More and more teenagers are (1) ______ to bed late because they use their phones. (2) ______ a result, they feel tired in class. Doctors advise young people to put their phones away an hour (3) ______ they sleep."
(1) go / going / went / gone   (2) In / At / As / On   (3) after / before / until / while
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(1) going (are + -ing) (2) As (as a result is the fixed phrase) (3) before (an hour before they sleep: put them away first, then sleep)

9.3Reference words and other glue

A reference word points back to something said before (or, sometimes, forward). A sentence that begins with a reference word needs its target just before the gap. In Form 3 the target can be an idea.

Reference wordPoints toExample
he, she, it, they, them, his, theira person, thing or group (check singular or plural, male or female)The workers finished early. They were paid extra.
this, thata whole idea, event or factThe bridge was closed for a month. This upset many drivers.
this / these / such + nouna named idea, summed up by a nounMany beaches are covered with plastic. This problem is getting worse. Such pollution kills turtles.
which (after a comma)the whole clause before itHe passed, which surprised everybody.
one, ones, so, do soreplace a noun, an adjective or a verb phraseI lost my pen, so I bought a new one. Will it rain? I hope so.
the former, the latterthe first or the second of two things just namedA tent or a hotel? The latter costs more.
both, neither, eithertwo things or people just namedAli and Ben applied. Both were accepted.

Repeated words and synonyms

Writers avoid repeating a word by using a synonym (a word with the same meaning) or a more general word: a storm then the bad weather; a plane then the aircraft. The textbook trains this in finding synonyms (Unit 11, p.137). If the sentence after the gap uses the bad weather, the gap sentence must have named a storm, rain or wind.

Example: pointing to an idea

Our school will stop selling drinks in plastic bottles next term. (gap) Pupils will be asked to bring their own bottles.

A This is part of a plan to reduce rubbish at the canteen.
B He said that the canteen would also close on Fridays.

The first sentence is about a decision, so we need This (the decision), and the plan leads on to Pupils will be asked to bring their own bottles. He in B has no man or boy to point to, and closing on Fridays is a different topic. The answer is A.

Ambiguous pointers. "Sara told Aina that she had lost her bag" could mean either girl. In Part 5 the right sentence is the one whose pointer has only one possible target before the gap. Check the others: if the pointer could refer to two things, look for another clue.
Malay dia means both "he" and "she", and -nya can mean "his", "her" or "its". Check gender: a sentence with he cannot follow a sentence about a woman. Do not use it for people, or they for one thing.
What does each bold phrase point to? "Last year, the council closed two old footbridges in our town because they were unsafe. This upset many residents. Such decisions are never popular, but the council had no choice. The new one, which opened in March, is much wider."
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(a) they: the two old footbridges (b) This: the closing of the footbridges (the council's decision) (c) Such decisions: decisions to close something people use (d) The new one: a new footbridge

9.4Linking words by job

A linking word shows how two ideas connect. When the gap sentence begins with one, check that the sentence before the gap gives the right kind of idea; when the sentence after the gap begins with one, the gap sentence must supply what it needs. The plans in the Writing Reference (pp.176 to 181) give several of them (in addition, as for, alternatively, however, on the other hand, suddenly, eventually, to sum up), and the Learning box on p.104 groups the adding, reason and example words. The rest are common in Form 3 texts.

JobLinking words and phrasesThe sentence before gives ...
Addingalso, in addition, besides, as for, what is morea point of the same kind
Contrasthowever, nevertheless, even so, on the other hand, whereas, whilean idea that goes the other way
Alternativealternatively, another possibility, insteada first option that was described
Resultso, as a result, therefore, that is whya cause
Reasonbecause, since, as, because of thisa result (the reason follows)
Examplefor example, for instance, such as, one example isa general idea
Time orderat first, then, after that, meanwhile, eventually, at last, by the timean earlier step or another event at the same time
Sudden eventsuddenly, all of a sudden, just then, at that pointa calm or normal situation
Concludingin conclusion, to sum up, for these reasonsall the points have been discussed

Grammar and punctuation of contrast words

WordPatternExample
However / Neverthelessstart a new sentence; comma afterIt rained all day. Nevertheless, the match went ahead.
although / even thoughjoin two clauses in one sentence; never with butAlthough it rained, the match went ahead.
despite / in spite offollowed by a noun or an -ing formDespite the rain, the match went ahead.
whereas / whilecontrast two things in one sentenceAli is quiet, whereas his brother is noisy.
Although it rained, but the match went ahead. Use although or but, not both. Despite it rained: despite needs a noun or -ing form (despite the rain, despite raining). Besides means "also"; do not confuse it with beside (next to).
Choose from: however, meanwhile, as a result, for instance, despite. Use each once.
(a) The beach was crowded. ______, we found a quiet corner. (b) Ali was cooking dinner. ______, his sister was setting the table. (c) The factory dumped waste in the river. ______, many fish died. (d) Some fruits are rich in vitamin C. ______, guavas have more than oranges. (e) ______ the heavy rain, the match went ahead.
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(a) However (b) Meanwhile (c) As a result (d) For instance (e) Despite (needs a noun, the heavy rain)

9.5Paragraph plans and topic sentences

Each text type in the Writing Reference has a plan, and gaps usually fall on the plan's key moves. If you know the plan, you can predict what kind of sentence is missing.

Text type (page)PlanTypical gap sentences
Informal email (p.176, p.177)greeting, thanks and reason for writing, more details, extra information, signing offThanks for your email. / I'm writing to ... / In addition, ... / As for ... / Write back soon!
Story (p.179)set the scene, background, main events in order, a twist, an ending and feelingsAt first, ... / Meanwhile, ... / Suddenly, ... / Eventually, ...
Review (p.180)introduce, describe with examples, recommendationFor example, ... / On the other hand, ... / I highly recommend ...
Report (p.181)purpose, first option, second option, conclusionThe aim of this report is to ... / Alternatively, ... / In conclusion, ...

A topic sentence states the main idea of a paragraph and usually comes first. A gap at the start of a paragraph needs a sentence that introduces everything that follows. A gap in the middle needs a detail, an example or a reason. A gap at the end needs a result, a feeling or a conclusion.

Example: which paragraph start?

(gap) First, it keeps you fit without costing any money. Second, it is faster than a bus in a busy town. Finally, it does not pollute the air.

A Cycling to school has three clear advantages.
B My bicycle was a present from my uncle.

The paragraph lists First, Second, Finally: three points. A names the topic and says "three advantages", so the list that follows develops it. B is about the same topic but gives a different, personal detail and does not lead to a list.

Read the first sentence of every paragraph before you begin. They give you the plan of the text and tell you where each gap sentence belongs.
A report on the school canteen has four paragraphs. Which paragraph (1 to 4) does each sentence belong to? (a) To sum up, the main recommendation is to add a second counter. (b) The aim of this report is to examine the queues at the canteen. (c) Alternatively, the school could let pupils order lunch in advance. (d) The first option would be to open a second counter.
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(b) 1: purpose of the report. (d) 2: first option. (c) 3: Alternatively brings a second option. (a) 4: To sum up is the conclusion.

9.6Order, tense and suspense

The gap sentence must happen at the right time and use a tense that fits. In stories the Writing Reference (p.179) tells you to use narrative tenses:

TenseUse in a storyExample
past simplethe main events, one after anotherWe reached the hut and made a fire.
past continuousthe background, or an event in progressIt was raining while we were walking.
past perfectsomething that happened before the story timeWhen we arrived, the others had already left.

By the time and by then often go with the past perfect. A present tense sentence does not belong in a story set in the past.

The textbook also gives expressions that create suspense in a story (Unit 7, p.93). Most of them expect a calm or normal moment before them and a reaction after them.

Textbook Useful Expressions box headed Creating suspense with ten phrases such as At that point, All of a sudden, Without thinking, There was no sign of, To make things worse, and They were just about to give up when
Expressions that create suspense.

Figure: Close-up B1 Student's Book (Form 3), p.93.

Example

We were crossing the lake in a small boat. The water was calm. (gap) The engine coughed and stopped.

A All of a sudden, there was a strong smell of smoke.
B Every morning, we crossed the lake before breakfast.

A gives the sudden event that leads to the engine problem. B is a habit in a different time (every morning), so it breaks the story.

A sentence that happens too early or too late is a trap. "Eventually we got home" cannot come before "We set off at six". And Meanwhile means that two things happen at the same time: the sentence before must describe another action in progress.
Put in the correct tense: (a) By the time we reached the camp, the others (already put up) ______ their tents. (b) We (walk) ______ along the river when we heard a loud noise. (c) Cikgu Lina (already leave) ______ when we arrived at the hall.
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(a) had already put up (earlier than reached) (b) were walking (event in progress, interrupted) (c) had already left (earlier than arrived)

9.7The method and a worked example

StepWhat you do
1. SkimRead the title and the whole text quickly. Who? What type of text? Which tense?
2. CircleIn the sentences, circle reference words, linking words and tenses.
3. Look both waysFor each gap, read the sentence before and the sentence after. The word after the gap (This, However, They) often decides it.
4. Strongest firstFill the gap with the clearest clue, then cross the sentence out.
5. Narrow downWith fewer sentences left, check the clues again for the rest.
6. Read it againRead every paragraph with your sentences in it. Does it sound natural? Are the pointers and tenses right?
Worked example in the real format: six gaps, eight sentences

Read the text below. Six sentences have been removed from the text.
Choose from the sentences (A - H) to fit each gap (35 - 40).

Plastic in the Ocean

Every year, about eight million tonnes of plastic end up in the world's oceans. (35) ______ Unlike paper or food, plastic does not rot. Most of it breaks into tiny pieces, which stay in the water for hundreds of years.

Sea animals suffer most. (36) ______ Turtles, for example, often mistake floating plastic bags for jellyfish, which are their favourite food.

(37) ______ However, scientists have developed a special enzyme that breaks down plastic bottles in a few days. (38) ______ Both ideas are promising, but they are still too expensive for most countries.

The most effective answer, though, is to stop plastic from reaching the sea in the first place. (39) ______ If everyone refused single-use bags, bottles and straws, far less waste would be thrown away.

(40) ______ Small choices, repeated by millions of people, can keep the oceans alive for the future.

A That is roughly one rubbish truck emptied into the sea every minute.
B Cleaning the oceans is extremely difficult, because the waste is spread over millions of square kilometres.
C In addition, some companies now make packaging from seaweed.
D Many of them swallow pieces of plastic or become trapped in old fishing nets.
E This means that every one of us has a part to play, not only governments and factories.
F To sum up, we cannot wait for someone else to solve the problem.
G He told us that he would collect bottles on the beach.
H Most of them are used for only a few minutes before they are thrown away.

GapClues before and afterAnswer
(35)The sentence before gives an amount (eight million tonnes). That in A points to this amount, and one rubbish truck every minute makes it easier to imagine.A
(36)The sentence before is a general idea (Sea animals suffer most). Many of them in D points to the animals, and Turtles, for example is one example of it.D
(37)After the gap, However introduces good news, so the gap needs a problem. B is a difficulty about cleaning the oceans, and the paragraph is about solutions.B
(38)It follows the enzyme, so In addition adds a second solution. After the gap, Both ideas needs two ideas: the enzyme and the seaweed packaging.C
(39)The sentence before gives the answer (stop plastic reaching the sea). This means in E explains what it means for people. After the gap, If everyone refused ... develops every one of us.E
(40)The last paragraph needs a conclusion. To sum up in F closes the text, and Small choices follows from the problem being ours to solve.F

The two extra sentences. G has He, but no man or boy is named in the text (pointer check). H has them, which could point to plastic bottles at gap 38, but it gives no second idea for Both ideas, and at gap 36 Most of them would mean the sea animals, which are not thrown away (topic check); at gap 39 them has no plural noun just before it (pointer check). Step 6: read the text again. The pointers (that, many of them, this, both), the linking words (however, in addition, to sum up) all fit. Answers: 35 A, 36 D, 37 B, 38 C, 39 E, 40 F. G and H are not used.

9.8Ruling out sentences that do not fit

When two sentences seem to fit, test each one against these checks. A sentence that fails one check is wrong for that gap.

CheckThe sentence is wrong if ...Example
Pointerits reference word has no matching target"They were delicious." after "Mum made a chocolate cake."
Linkits linking word does the wrong job"As a result, we won." after "Our best player was sick."
Topicit belongs to another paragraph's ideaa sentence about lunch in a paragraph about the morning walk
Order and tenseit is too early, too late or in a different tense"We go home happily." in a story set in the past
Repetitionit only repeats something already said"We left at 7.00." when the time is already given
Contradictionit disagrees with the sentence after the gap"It was very easy." before "I tried five times before I got it right."
Example: two sentences that seem to fit

Kavitha joined the school choir in January. (gap) Now she is not afraid of singing on stage.

E At first, she was very shy and sang softly.
F She has always loved singing in front of people.

The sentence after the gap says Now she is not afraid of singing: she was afraid before. E gives the "before" picture. F contradicts it, because someone who always loved singing was never afraid. The answer is E.

Do not choose a sentence only because it shares a word with the text (singing, boat, choir). Same word, wrong link, is the usual trap.
After you finish, check the spelling of what you copy and read the text once more (checking spelling, Unit 7, p.88; reviewing your writing, p.93). Two sentences are always left over, so check that every letter you choose is used only once and that the two you leave out really fail a check.
Practice (two of the four sentences are extra, as in the real paper). Choose a sentence for each gap.
"Every Saturday, Haziq helps his grandfather at the pasar tani. (a) ______ It sells bananas, papayas and pineapples from their farm. By noon, most of the fruit is sold. (b) ______ They pack up and go home."
E His grandfather has a small fruit stall there.
F It is in a car park near the mosque.
G Haziq and his grandfather are happy with the morning's work.
H Last month, he won a prize for his school project.
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(a) E: there points to the pasar tani, and the next sentence starts with It sells, which needs a stall. (b) G: it gives how they feel after the fruit is sold, and They in the next sentence points to Haziq and his grandfather. F is extra: if it came at (a), It sells would mean the car park sells fruit. H is extra: it is about a school prize, a different topic, and it does not lead to They pack up.

Summary

PointRemember
Part 5 formatone text, 6 gaps (35 to 40), 8 sentences A to H with 2 extra, 6 marks, about 10 minutes.
Reading around the gapSkim, predict a word or idea, then read the options and test them with the words before and after the gap (p.97).
Referencehe, she, it, they, this, which, such, the latter: the target must be just before the gap; this and which can point to a whole idea.
Linking wordsadding, contrast, alternative, result, reason, example, time, sudden, concluding; the sentence before must give the matching kind of idea.
Plansemail, story, review and report each have a plan (pp.176 to 181); the gap usually sits on a key move.
Order and tensenarrative tenses: past simple, past continuous and past perfect; not too early, not too late.
MethodSkim, circle clues, look both ways, strongest first, narrow down, read it again.